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企鹅英语 上一就是初中一年级谨虚读物。the story happened in 1798 ,Jenny and her father Sam Tinker worked on the market. Tinkerwas taken for a thief,so he was caght and sent to Austrilia.Jenny went to save her father and they fled to an island.纯手写，应该没有语法错误指辩悄正二楼的错误，时态要一致。主人公携晌渣的名字叫Tinker三楼的错误，happen没有被动语态，was happening或是had happened 或是直接happened
